Today I have a dinner with my senior high school fyiends.I am so exciting because of I did not see
them so long time.All of us so busy.
And we decide to go to TASTY restaurant.After that we will go play bowling together.
I hope our friendship always be great.For me,they are important people in my life.
Hi, Doris: I am glad that you had a wonderful time with one of your friends in senior high school. We all know that good friends who can support you even when you are down are real friends.
回覆刪除However, I am afraid that you should have paid more attention to your tenses and sentence structures when you write English. From your blog, I am not sure whether you met your friend or not. You said that 'today I have a dinner with my senior high school friends.' It seems that you got together with your friends already. But then you said that 'after that we will go play bowling together.' It seems that you will meet them later. In addition, a complete English sentence should need at least one subject and one verb. Therefore, 'All of us so busy.' is not an English sentence, for it does not have a verb. Similarly, 'After that we will go play bowling together.' is not an English sentence either, for it has two verbs used together -- 'go' and 'play'.